Really good story in my point of view. The story development is quite smooth, the mc is building is own army but we don't see him build his own cultivation method and that could be nice. The characters design are nicely done with some evolution going on. As for the world world background i don't have anything to say, it is just perfect, well maybe do tell some more details about the cultivation world or maybe you will when the mc is getting stronger, can't wait to see. Now if i have to say a negative things is the writing quality (not bad but not good either). It lacks some good proofreading (same words or written next to each other, some contradictroy it writing is done often and could be avoid by proofreading). So far so good with some mishap happening with the writing but i recommend this story.
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