GodsAre_Stupid
Now i’ll be honest, despite the potential and Concept of using transformers “pre-war” is a truly great idea. It has quite a few issues aswell. Pros: 1. The concept is wonderful and clearly a hidden Gem. Cons: 1. Everything is basicly handed on a silver platter for the character. 2. The main character isn’t realistic in origin, skill and authority. 3. the character from what i can perceive a few chapters in is pretty much a “Mary Sue” *attention sucking blackhole with plot-armor as cherry on top* 4. Most of the other reviews doesn’t make any sense despite the full star votes and leads to a false impressions. Summary: great idea, poorly executed... Solution: Start with a somewhat humble or older character could be one. That’s merely one solution that probably won’t fix anything at this point. Comment: Author did note his inexperience and it’s fair quality for a first~
Hey guys, author here, I am sorry, but I will have to drop this novel for the time being. I am no genius in studying and is very difficult for me to catch up with my studies if I write this novel. Please forgive me, guys Please forgive me, guys Please forgive me, guys Please forgive me, guys If I ever get the chance, I will continue this novel Thanks for supporting me guys Good-Bye
honestly it's an amazing read and I love it used to come home from school almost everyday and check there was an update and now I'm just hoping that it really is just a break cuz I understand if it's a break it can be stressful but you can recover and you've got this you're doing amazing so far it's excellent I understand if there's something happening in your life and I know you'll get through it and I'll still be here waiting
idea was really really great but the execution was really really bad. dude if you don't know how to write wuxia novel the .dont try it, and this night shadows character he doesn't even have a straight personality,it's like AUTHOR is mind controlling him so he can manipulate the plot or something like that.... well all the authors do that because they write the story so there's no other way but they make their characters have at least a straight personality not random multiple. there is no explanation in world background, imagine you were told that in Naruto people uses chakra and become ninja and you have to figure out how chakra works and it's theory and all, that's how the world background is explained.
This is one of the most interesting novel that i have read in this crappy app. I just hope that you, "Mr. author." Would stop making wuxia jokes like the time Night Shadow first walked in the cybertron soldier facility cuz its making me cringe, like a lot. If u can do that then this novel would be much more better since if u add wuxia jokes like that then this novel would be much more interesting to read. Ps. You have no idea how wuxia things are ruining a lot of novel these days, they make a novel sound like b*llsh*t.
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