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Monolithian3mthReplied to DaoistCnPyXTThink the american presidentual residence or however it’s designated.
Some witches mentioned they were scared to expose their identity because they have lived longer than the white house.- Monolithian3mthCommented
I can appreciate the character development shown so far.
It is impossible for the game developers to go into so much detail when making NPC characters. The people she met today all had names and families, they had a story and connections. It is not just a backstory that is part of the game, they have nothing to do with the game. - Monolithian3mthCommentedCh 151 A Choice
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This one a hole cannot make.
"I will not be kind to Alessandra," Kate made up her mind. She couldn't do that even if she tried her hardest. She hated Alessandra to the moon and back. "I'm going to make her regret having Edgar propose to her. I should make a cell and throw her in it to never see the light of day." - Monolithian4mthCommented
I’m sorry, but this gotta be a plothole. How is our fl aware which dress was her intended???
" Can you see the tiny cloth pieces attached to these gemstones? It belongs to the dress that you have prepared for me to wear to the Banquet." - Monolithian4mthCommented
Perpetual constipation.
What would be the most deserving punishment for a cheater? - Monolithian4mthCommentedAs I lay there catching my breath amidst the crumbling cityscape and anguished screams, the earth trembled beneath me. I turned to witness a stampede of dinosaurs approaching.
- Monolithian4mthCommentedShe felt like she heard that name somewhere.
- Monolithian5mthCommentedI call it… "The curl up and die face".
- Monolithian3yrPosted
Now i’ll be honest, despite the potential and Concept of using transformers “pre-war” is a truly great idea. It has quite a few issues aswell. Pros: 1. The concept is wonderful and clearly a hidden Gem. Cons: 1. Everything is basicly handed on a silver platter for the character. 2. The main character isn’t realistic in origin, skill and authority. 3. the character from what i can perceive a few chapters in is pretty much a “Mary Sue” *attention sucking blackhole with plot-armor as cherry on top* 4. Most of the other reviews doesn’t make any sense despite the full star votes and leads to a false impressions. Summary: great idea, poorly executed... Solution: Start with a somewhat humble or older character could be one. That’s merely one solution that probably won’t fix anything at this point. Comment: Author did note his inexperience and it’s fair quality for a first~
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Recommending refining the desertion from the castle to the cemetary. As of the moment it looks pretty lazy and sloppy*
Ye Ming was ecstatic. He did not expect to get so lucky and could not believe a random cemetery like this would actually contain a treasure chest. As such, Ye Ming decided to search the cemetery to see if he could find more. - Monolithian3yrCommented
Now it did end well and all. Do imagine if he missed though** Bad idea to throw your biggest advantage without a *very* good reason.
Ye Ming turned around and threw the Vampiric Dagger like a throwing knife. A cold ray of grey pierced into the abdomen of the good-looking Vampire. He swayed a few times before falling to the ground, dead. - Monolithian3yrCommented*Ding* [Treasure chest successfully opened. Congratulations, you have obtained the {Eyes of Terror}.]
- Monolithian3yrReplied to ToonwormSensing some changes in his mouth, Ye Ming rushed to the mirror to took a look.
- Monolithian3yrCommentedThere was always one gift that came from the same person, X. This time, the gift he sent was a box of chocolates.
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*Heal*
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**Sole Exceptions**
This paragraph has been deleted. - Monolithian3yrCommented"So you are beta too?" Derick, who was standing in the middle, took a couple of steps forward, as he took out one big sword from his scabbard, holding it perfectly with one hand.