Reviews of Reincarnated as a Fallen Angel

This is my first review and I just have to say I read 50 chapters in one day only stopping cause I caught up and this story just hooked me i absolutely love this story.

The story and characters are captivating! The occasional grammatical errors wrench me out of the story a little bit, but with a good editor this could make it big.

This is my favourite out of all the others I read so far.

It is fun with great world building.

I like how the author did not reincarnate the hero to a different world like most novels that deal with reincarnation but instead later in time in their original world

I like books like this and the is like the 5th fantasy book I read on this app and so far so good and I usually read comics on here because I hate reading long paragraphs. So when I tried it out and started reading this story it changed my whole point of view. So with that being said this book changed my perspective of the books I read.

This book is amazing it was one of the first I read on this platform and I couldn't put it down until I was caught up! I really hope this book continues the way it is going as it is amazing!

You should consider having someone proof-read your chapters to reduce grammatical errors, including punctuation, spelling, and improve your work's fluency. Since you already have a stable and (very) fast upload schedule, I think that taking some time to read through your work before posting won't harm you. On the other hand, I really enjoy the STAT / LEVEL system in Angel Reborn. Even though the narrative is predictable and somewhat shallow, it is easy to understand and reads quickly - which is, sometimes, exactly what we all want. What I wish to see more: World background, especially in the first chapter (because there's plenty of room). I'd love to hear more about the protagonist's surroundings, how some of the monsters look (in detail). Also - don't be afraid to be realistic and have the protagonist struggle more! Right now, she is very close to being a "Mary Sue". Over-all, very creative and innovative, definitely worth continuing.

I really like the novel so far and am always excited for new chapters. The fight scenes are, at least in my opinion, well made and engaging and the characters also seem fleshed out. I can recommend this novel if your currently are looking for a new fantasy novel to read.

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This is a great novel to read! It has game genre that made you excited to read. Looking forward for more chapters as I am excited to see how FL struggled from weak-strong. Good job auhtor!

Writing seems pretty neat although I found some spelling mistakes. No worries those are pretty few to mention. Your grammar is okay, much better than mine actually. You incorporate the system to the story pretty well and is easily understandable by the reader(me). Next is the fight scenes, I like the way you describe the moves of your character. How she moves, it is pretty well described and the pace of the fight is good. Lastly, there's a lot of stories and games that exist in the genre. However I found your story to be one of the most interesting so far. The story however I cannot conclude as of the moment since it is pretty short. I had fun reading and I hope you can maintain such good work. Thank you for reading my review. -The Lone Wulf

I really enjoy your use of the system, your novel is pretty unique, to be honest, it's kind of refreshing to read. Have some spelling mistakes and run-on sentences like a few others have mentioned. However, it doesn't take away from the story so maybe to get an editor to clean thing up.

I believe your story has potential and is an overall good concept. I've been loving it so far and I believe that if you keep working on your story like this, you have the potential for front page material.

Really good story, but I found some writing mistakes in it. The plot of the story gets more interesting and the story line gives a mystery and adventure feel to the story

First I would like to say that I have read hundreds of books in real life and this app. And I gotta say this is definitely one of the best plots I've ever read. And even though the author doesn't post new chapters every day he makes up for it with the quality of the chapters. Keep up the good work skirts I loveur book and can't wait to see how u mix the mothers day special on with the real story.

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Great book. Love the direction it is heading in and cant wait to read more.

Uhhhhhh i’m just tryna get xp but i hope everyone is enjoying the book, sounds pretty interesting based on the description and reviews, have fun reading :)

This is only the third book I started since getting the app and it the most amazing thing I’ve read even compared to award winning books I get at my local library.