Review Detail of lord_fallen in Reincarnated as a Fallen Angel

You should consider having someone proof-read your chapters to reduce grammatical errors, including punctuation, spelling, and improve your work's fluency. Since you already have a stable and (very) fast upload schedule, I think that taking some time to read through your work before posting won't harm you. On the other hand, I really enjoy the STAT / LEVEL system in Angel Reborn. Even though the narrative is predictable and somewhat shallow, it is easy to understand and reads quickly - which is, sometimes, exactly what we all want. What I wish to see more: World background, especially in the first chapter (because there's plenty of room). I'd love to hear more about the protagonist's surroundings, how some of the monsters look (in detail). Also - don't be afraid to be realistic and have the protagonist struggle more! Right now, she is very close to being a "Mary Sue". Over-all, very creative and innovative, definitely worth continuing.