Review Detail of Allen_Clay012 in Reincarnated as a Fallen Angel

Writing seems pretty neat although I found some spelling mistakes. No worries those are pretty few to mention. Your grammar is okay, much better than mine actually. You incorporate the system to the story pretty well and is easily understandable by the reader(me). Next is the fight scenes, I like the way you describe the moves of your character. How she moves, it is pretty well described and the pace of the fight is good. Lastly, there's a lot of stories and games that exist in the genre. However I found your story to be one of the most interesting so far. The story however I cannot conclude as of the moment since it is pretty short. I had fun reading and I hope you can maintain such good work. Thank you for reading my review. -The Lone Wulf