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I read through chapter 24. I didn't enjoy it as much as I thought I would. But I assume a lot of people would like this type of story. I believe I held my expectations too high with SCP lore. I am glad that there are SCP fanfics out there, which I didn't know was a thing. What I like most about the story are the characters. The author did an excellent job of introducing new characters. I thought the overall text had good fluidity and transitions. The story felt fast-paced but not forced. I also liked the dialogue, but there are discrepancies. I have other positives, but I want to keep this review short. What I disliked most about is the inconsistencies of the characters. You can tell when the author writes a character, but it feels off, given the situation. I think the MC changed too fast, contradicting his actions and thinking. I also believe there is room for improvement in writing. Overall, this is a decent story. I'll give this a 4/5.
A very good read, with few grammatical errors, and a good pace. The only thing I noticed that could be a bit better is the world's background info. Not everyone knows the SCPverse after all, so a brief synopsis would be appreciated at some point, maybe as the MC is reminiscing about how their world was introduced to SCP's or his reason for having previously joined the Foundation. However, even without this background info, it's a good story.
As Patrik_Patrik said. It is indeed the best SCP fanfic. Great story. Some things you might want to know are is he isnât a scp that already exists, his powers are pretty basic and not too overpowered so far, MC joins a couple groups, mostly in third person POV, and some minor mistakes but not enough even be a nuisance
Great story and great amount of updates, only not 5 stars because Iâm really impatient and want to continue reading but canât because author is writing more đ, anyways, was so good I binge read the 141 chapters that were there in 2 days, was all free so far so no need to wait for free passes or a need to buy coins. Thank you author and please keep up the good work đđ»