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Review Detail of WoahBuddy in Reborn as a SCP

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I read through chapter 24. I didn't enjoy it as much as I thought I would. But I assume a lot of people would like this type of story. I believe I held my expectations too high with SCP lore. I am glad that there are SCP fanfics out there, which I didn't know was a thing. What I like most about the story are the characters. The author did an excellent job of introducing new characters. I thought the overall text had good fluidity and transitions. The story felt fast-paced but not forced. I also liked the dialogue, but there are discrepancies. I have other positives, but I want to keep this review short. What I disliked most about is the inconsistencies of the characters. You can tell when the author writes a character, but it feels off, given the situation. I think the MC changed too fast, contradicting his actions and thinking. I also believe there is room for improvement in writing. Overall, this is a decent story. I'll give this a 4/5.

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