Ak02
Got hooked from the first chapter. Love how the story progresses and the fact that we have clear goals and not just mindlessly doing things. I love the world building as it feels like the world is live through and functioning. Still early chapters but Abium has already grown on me. The grammar is excellent enough to draw you in. All I can complain about is that we want more chapters
The story line seems to be pretty interesting so far. I am curious to see what's going to happen during the MC's journey. I know only 11 chapters are out so far, so I can't really do a complete review. There was a lot of explaining in the beginning, I'm guessing mainly just to rush the story along and get to the base of the story. Towards the last few chapters there were a bit more dialogues and it included the world a little more, so I like that aspect about it. Other than it starting out a little slow paced I thought this story seemed pretty interesting. Although the author did say it's meant to be a slow-paced novel. Keep it up author!