Kotrem
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
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The reason I'm giving this two stars is simple,when the MC came back to his sect after being away for ten years he didn't just go in there and told everyone he was back,no he decided to be a d#ck and pretend to be someone who knew him self. I feel like those chapters where just filler that didn't give anything to the story,it was just annoying. I would of given this at least three stars but the author decided to do this and I didn't want to read anymore of the novel after.
Love the book and hope you keep writing and please don't drop it.๐๐๐๐๐๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐น๐น๐น๐น๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐จ๐จ๐จ๐จ๐จ๐จ๐จ๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ท๐ท๐ท๐ท๐ท๐ท๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐๐๐๐๐๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ผ๐ผ๐ผ๐ผ๐ผ๐ผ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The beginning few chapters which were a rather good build up, did feel a little generic and cliche at times. At points I did wonder on whether the novel was worth trudging through. However as aforementioned it was good enough and once things swung into motion for the main protagonist, the author managed to grasp away your attention before you even knew it. I enjoyed the novel so far, the further the character progresses the more difficult it felt to put down the novel. The characters within the book, all served special roles, they were provided with enough description for the story to progress, but unlike in many stories, this thankfully was not a drama. The relationship amongst the characters was fleshed out just about enough to make sense to the plot. They never held endless dialogues just to develop the current relationship, but instead every conversation related to important matters. Keeping in mind that the story centers it's attention around a serial killer, an individual with little humane emotions, such an approach towards other individuals within the story made sense. I look forward to see the progression of the novel, I have enjoyed it thus far and would recommend it to those who are solely interested in seeing the progression of a cold hearted killer, evolving his skills and affecting the world around him. As he isn't a hero in any sorts, his next choices and actions will always peak your curiousity.