I hope this gets picked! It's such an enjoyable read so far and different from the ones that start off with FL getting brutally betrayed/transmigrated/reborn/etc. If not selected, they should at least give us the real title so we can mtl! Point of difference noticed so far is no ravine mentioned in synopsis ...
what is going on WEBNOVEL, this story has been chosen more than a month ago and it has not started yet and with so many votes, they are jumping to typical and boring novels and leaving this story that has us excited behind, it is not fair that always the best ones stories discard them and sit in the same old. WEBONVEL does not leave this good story behind as it has done with many others that are different and exciting, filling us only with the same story contracted from other points of view and with different names and settings, we already know it by heart... we hope that we do not disappoint again.[img=monedas][img=actualizar]
Are you for real? I just want to warn people who's intending to read this that although it is tagged as 'completed' it's actually not. Yep, it's not. It's listed with 110 chapters btw so if in the future it's updated just keep this in mind. Anyway, in the firt place I don't have any expectations but still, it's frustrating to suddenly find out in the last chapter that it's actually just the part 1. I tried to look for raws to check how many chapters in total but i couldn't find it. I'm annoyed. Anyway, I'll just discuss the characters and the situation for this review. There's nothing much to say about the father and grandpa. I find their character stiff and without much depth. Sure their characteristics and personality were blatantly written but because of that, there's little chapters dedicated to them to actually showcase those personality so in the end you just have to believe how they were described. Little depth, in short. As for the FL, I'll cut her some slack and excuse her immature views and perception for her age. She's young, what do you expect? The challenges she's gone through weren't much and the intensity could be compared to petty fights with children their age. But she's naive, kind, and smart. As for the ML, they only met once. There's also nothing much to say about him. Her friends were even more mentioned than him. I find it awkward how their meeting went. He was 18 at that time and the FL was just a little girl. I'm not sure about the age but i know she's just in her elementary days. I feel a bit disgusted with how other people (like his comrades) tease them and how the story is leaning on that direction. Please don't.
I have only ready the first 21 chapters but I like it. l don't normally leave a review unless I like a story and want it to get picked. Normally these stories were the real daughter was brought up in the country side start when they are brought back to the "real" family, so we don't see the character development of the child, but this story is different here we are seeing the girl grow up, who is very cute and funny, and she seems to be a lucky person. She is smart, brave and kind and doted on by her father. The story is very well written and there are very few mistakes. The author has done a good job of pulling us into the story and has set the scene very well. I truly am enjoying this story and would like to see how it develops, so for that I hope it gets picked. Well done author keep up the good work.
This is so good I remember when it disappeared a while ago and I was searching for it all over trying to find the raw name I just couldn’t the reason I probably like this so mush is that she’ s an actual child and I feel like it’ been so long that I could find one were the protagonist was actually a child