Raychbunni
Grammar of this story is just amazing, author. š¦ The first chapter is a little bit confusing, but you have to read further to see the main plot slowly developing, mind you that chapter two leaves you with a proper cliffhanger. I personally was surprised lol The main lead seems to be intricated, itās hard to like her at first, but then when you read more, you slowly begin to understand why sheās like this and what exactly is going on.š¤§ The first chapter was too detailed, sometimes we have to leave some for our readers to imagine for themselves. Besides that, this bookās name can be misleading to some people, not showing the main point, itās differs from the plot, which is just exceptional and inimitable. I think that Webnovel should do a better job while promoting this book, it deserves a lot of praise. šš» š¦š¦š¦š¦š¦š¦
The feeling of the theme and the narration of the events are so good that I felt like I was reading one of the world-famous classic novels for a moment. The author is very successful in reflecting the feelings and thoughts of the characters. It may not appeal to everyone because it has a heavy air, but I think it will easily draw those who read novels on this theme. Good work authorš
I was fully engaged during the first chapter, the scene was tense and gritty, but the pace seemed to slow down a bit in the later chapters. I assume we are still early on in the story and that might explains why Iām not sure what direction itās heading, but overall I love this, and I LOVE the authorās fearless writing style. Nicely done!
Fantastic story!! I've never read a system before and have no interest but this is awesome!! From the first chapter, I wasn't able to stop. Author's use of words, FL's personality, and description is something I admire, and frankly, jealous of! I really like the system's character here as it sounds natural, as if it's a conversation held between friends. I will continue reading this and hope to discover and learn from this story!! Thank you for putting these in words and letting it out to the world!!