Andru_9788
20 chapters in and i can already tell i'm gonna enjoy this series! pros: super fun characters who have very fun dynamics between each other! i love the dumb but outspoken mc! interesting premise! mostly smooth and pretty writing with good detail! although... cons: a lot of run-in sentences and a noticeable lack of commas and other tone/pace indicators. i don't find it too disruptive, but it does read awkwardly for me every once in a while. grammar mistakes as well: "will" being used instead of "we'll", "destruction" being used instead of "distraction" etc. but again, it doesn't take too much away from how engaging i find the story to be in general. so basically it'd be cool if author could go back and fix some of their writing or have a proofreader for that job BUT i like what the author is cooking here and i am gonna continue reading :d
A wonderful story! It is a great read especially when you are searching for something fun to read. The characters are lovely and entertaining (some of their witty remarks make my day). Some may argue that there isn't much world building; however, in my opinion, the information provided regarding the world/setting is enough for the story thus far. Though there are unresolved issues in the end, if I would focus on the journey of the couple main couple to be together, I am satisfied with the story so far. Nevertheless, I hope that they will be resolved someday if (and that's a very big if) the author decide to write a 2nd installment. Give it a try and find out. ^_^ Enjoy reading! ----- Thank you so much, author-nim for sharing this story. I appreciate your hard work and effort in writing this. Have a good day and stay safe!