Review Detail of tuna_enjoyer in Prince and His Fool (Boylove)

20 chapters in and i can already tell i'm gonna enjoy this series! pros: super fun characters who have very fun dynamics between each other! i love the dumb but outspoken mc! interesting premise! mostly smooth and pretty writing with good detail! although... cons: a lot of run-in sentences and a noticeable lack of commas and other tone/pace indicators. i don't find it too disruptive, but it does read awkwardly for me every once in a while. grammar mistakes as well: "will" being used instead of "we'll", "destruction" being used instead of "distraction" etc. but again, it doesn't take too much away from how engaging i find the story to be in general. so basically it'd be cool if author could go back and fix some of their writing or have a proofreader for that job BUT i like what the author is cooking here and i am gonna continue reading :d