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NamJaNun

NamJaNun

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2020-07-11 JoinedNetherlands
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Posted

    Well written. The characters are relatable even though they are made up. The MC is thank god also unique. After reading stories that are near copies of each other, reading this, has been very refreshing and fun. I'm not disappointed for spending money on this story

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    Phoenix Phire
    Games · BotwaCazador
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Posted

    Read few pages but became irritated. The story is full of contradictions. You are reminded over and over again that the MC is from the past. The story is slightly unique but it didn't make me want add it end spend money on it.

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    Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start
    Fantasy · Strange Human
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Commented

    Ghana 🇬🇭 a real country in West Africa.

    Li Yi had been mentally prepared for this. He took a moment to recollect himself before he walked in. In the historical background of Divine Revelation, this statue was the founding monarch of the Ghana Empire. Legend has it that he was extremely strong and could be compared to a God. However, no player has ever seen him in person!
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    Online Game: My Health Point Has No Limits
    Games · Foreign Region King
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Commented

    The last sentence is so wrong. As if he's talking to a dog

    "Shen! I warn you! Don't tell my mom, okay?" Dale spoke something to the woman, maybe asking her to not speak before he talked to Shen. He also did not bother to hide it from Shen.
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    Noob Player
    Games · HotIce
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Commented

    It not weather but whether.

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    altalt
    My Mage System (BL)
    LGBT+ · CeliaNaya
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Posted

    Really interesting story. I haven’t read a LGBTQ story like this before. The characters or interesting, the side snippet are well integrated. The only problem is that sometimes the grammar and spelling are really bad. It so bad that it interference with the reading flow. Hope that the writing can fix that before uploading the next chapters.

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    My Mage System (BL)
    LGBT+ · CeliaNaya
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Posted

    The beginning wasn't that great but the middle and ending was fun to read. I even hoped for more chapters but the story was finished up nicely. This is one of the very few books on Webnovel that I really liked reading.

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    Prince and His Fool (Boylove)
    LGBT+ · Andru_9788
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Commented
    (some readers expressed that they were bothered by the three consecutive announcements, so I've changed it to x3. This will be the expression of the full-service announcements in the future. Thank you for your support.)
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    My Passive Skills are Invincible!
    Sci-fi · Ultimate Guaiguaipi
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Commented
    As a 30-year-old veteran player, Mike naturally had a certain understanding of Second World.
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    My Passive Skills are Invincible!
    Sci-fi · Ultimate Guaiguaipi
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Commented

    Really!! Could your repeat that. I mean I didn't know that

    After all, Mike was a 30-year-old veteran gamer, so he naturally had the habits of a gamer.
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    My Passive Skills are Invincible!
    Sci-fi · Ultimate Guaiguaipi
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Commented

    Seriously this was a trash chapter. Mike is even more stupid than his discipel

    Ch 76 Robbery? Could This Game Be Played Like This?
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    My Passive Skills are Invincible!
    Sci-fi · Ultimate Guaiguaipi
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Commented

    This chapter was really disappointing!!

    Ch 61 The World Is Really Small, First Meeting With Super Rich
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    My Passive Skills are Invincible!
    Sci-fi · Ultimate Guaiguaipi
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Commented

    Really??? How many times do you have to tell us this??? I hope you can stop now. PLEASE

    However, with the blessing of his SSS-grade talent, the gun in Mike's hands had completely turned into a Gatling gun with unlimited bullets.
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    My Passive Skills are Invincible!
    Sci-fi · Ultimate Guaiguaipi
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Posted

    The story itself is entertaining. Not unique but interesting. Sadly the poor grammar takes away all the fun out of reading. The reader needs a lot patience and dedication if they want to spend money on this story. Hope the writer will go back and edit the beginning.

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    World Development System
    Sci-fi · autistic25
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Posted

    I know it's a translation but I hooe the originale is not like this. I've read a few chapters and those chapters are 2/3 repeated words. It's a pity/It was beautiful(that was repeated like nth in the first few chapters. You need a lot of patience to go through these chapters. I hope it get better.

    altalt
    Lord of the Oasis
    Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Commented

    repeat repeat

    The dates, which were known to be desert bread in the minds of the desert people, were comparable to staple foods like wheat, rice, and others.
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    Lord of the Oasis
    Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Replied to Daoisto2y6Ud

    Your correct. I've changed it. Thank you for correction!!

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    Tough Bride.
    LGBT+ · NamJaNun
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Posted

    The story is indeed weird en sometimes problematic. But I still want to keep on reading because it's so weird and confusing. I wouldn't recommend this but it's still a simple book to read if your bored.

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    My Fusion System: Fusing a Thousand Chickens at the Start
    Fantasy · Snow Over A Thousand Hills
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Replied to Reina_Sim_Nik

    And that is???

    Ch 1 Most Unlucky Creature In The World
    altalt
    Tough Bride.
    LGBT+ · NamJaNun
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  • NamJaNun
    NamJaNun2yr
    Replied to Mary_Algen_Guiang1

    Thank you!!! Thank you!!! Let's do our best and create great stories❤🧡💛💚💙💜🤎🖤🤍

    altalt
    Tough Bride.
    LGBT+ · NamJaNun
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