Reviews of Primordial Dimensions

Grain has always been great in writing, world building, and update stability! The world building makes me wonder if I can also enter the primordial dimension, xD Great read!

Is there a second story following up to this one?

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Is God's Eyes and Pirmordial Dimension connected/in the same universe or multiverse. I asking this because I saw that both novels mentioned the Corvi race.

great find and an amazing read. just wo during when the sequel will be coming out for this. it has great character development, an amazing plot line, and so much potential. can't wait for more.

It was an amazing read can't wait until the author releases the 2nd part / book 2 of the of the series if you likes his writing/style check out God's Eyes or his latest novel Spirit Soul

Author has an amazing writing stYle, Thats able to instantly draw you in(get your stonea ready youll know what i mean) The flow of the story is easy to follow gobing you enoygj to maintain the mystery it should have Until the end of the ride.

Story is pretty good and great info on the character and background. Honestly can't get enough of the book I find myself waiting on the new chapters to release.

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So I've read all free chapters and I have to say that I really like the novel and think it has good potential but It is too fast paced for my liking. Also, I have to say that most of the chapters are info dump which I dont really like and it would be better if there were more interactions with other characters like umbra, the biggest conversation he had was when mc messaged alex for blood. Still love the novel tho❤

This novel has the "Fantasy" tag for a reason and does not necessarily follow a common logic,I really like the character development and world background,

first off all 5 star rating brought me here 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣....hope it lives upto expectations.................................................

The first thing that you will like is the grammar which will make the transition into reading good. Then you enter the plot which will affix you to it and finally the characters which will make you continue onwards.

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Overall the novel is decent. But thee are just somethings that I can't move past. One of these is the numbers. Another is how the MC personality and how he acts is conflicting with what the author wrote and described.The numbers is the biggest one for me. At one point the MC is jumping, and exerting force to evade an enemy. this would be understandable, if the enemy wasn't even 2ft tall. 45 cm is 1.47 ft. Don't include numbers if they make no sense.

Almost dropped the story because I could tell that it was finished and short but with that said I’m glad I didn’t drop it. Hope there will be a second book about Shane that was mentioned by the author. I would definitely reads it to follow the story.

Hello, I really liked your book, in all its aspects, and therefore I would like to know when the release of the promised continuation (2 volumes of the book) will begin?

very enjoyable read and with a lot of potential. I only feel that the last stages were somewhat rushed.

When is the seque coming? God eyes ended and well, that explains the syst and all that… soooo… is there a next part comin? ………………. Lol ………….

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