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Auri_Kvothe1mthReplied to Xiu_Tangi've never laughed so hard in my life. At this point he just need to meet Halsin.
He had in-depth knowledge of the VR game, and he was an avid gamer, but what really gave him his confidence was his 3rd identity as a martial art practitioner.- Auri_Kvothe1mthCommentedThe thirteen Beginner Level Rank Two Shadow Undeads had released their Zone inside the shadow world the moment they were summoned. Although their Zone was way weaker than Moloch's Zone, they still managed to stop the power of his Zone using the power of friendship.
- Auri_Kvothe1mthReplied to OzandjoOrowa
Sarcasm?
[The Will and the Origin Expanse were not perfectly sealed. Origin energy leaked through the origin of the Universe, the only permanent link that remained as the universe split up. As the purest origin energy invaded the universe after billions of years had passed since the universe and the Origin Expanse split up, hundreds of galaxies faced destruction. The galaxies had been void of origin energy for billions of years. They were too fragile to endure the pressure that invaded every part of space and crumbled. Countless lives were reaped on that day…and all were pulled inside the Origin Expanse. They were confined in the Origin Expanse after origin energy contaminated their very being. - Auri_Kvothe1mthCommentedCh 703 Date I
- Auri_Kvothe2mthPosted
Finished reading the whole book. Will post points on each of the 5 Judging points. SPOILERS AHEAD *************************** Writing Quality: Overall generally good. slight grammatical mistakes that are easily over looked. They are consistent errors so once you're able to know what word to substitute for the written one you're good. There are times when names are mixed up, but again, easy to figure out who is being talked about. Stability of Updates: Book is finished. Nuff said. Story Development: This one gets the lowest rating from me. The pacing is all opver the place, and some time skips are sudden and random with no warning given. Also, around chapter 170/207 the pacing takes such a HUGE leap. we go from this guys day to day, to suddenly we're rushing the ending, introducing new kingdoms and entire story lines, with only 30 chapters or less left. The first 100ish chapters had great pacing, and while there were issues with him doing things it's clearly stating he can't, it's good. But then he's suddenly one of the most powerful in the entire dimension? (trying to avoid giving direct spoilers) It feels like Author just got tired of his story and threw in the kitchen sink and everything else, wrapped it up with some random time travel and said good enough. Character Design: Zayne is very well designed. He's well fleshed out and easy to comprehend. The other characters Author takes the time to have him really interact with are also well designed. World Background: MC clearly has memory loss, and in the first half of the novel, Author really draws you in. He makes you want to learn more about this massive realm with the MC. And then he tosses it all down the drain at the end. OVERALL: Decent read. Not Authors best work. Possibly his worst. Rushed ending killed any excitement I had for the novel. Would recommend? No. Would recommend the Author for having a decent writing style? absolutely.
- Auri_Kvothe4mthCommented
why does this make me think of the moon... and how those who see it go mad?
Come to think of it, how had the Doom War ended? What had actually happened to the daemons, the gods… and Weaver? Where did the Corruption that had devoured the Dream Realm come from, and why? - Auri_Kvothe5mthPosted
Overall the novel is decent. But thee are just somethings that I can't move past. One of these is the numbers. Another is how the MC personality and how he acts is conflicting with what the author wrote and described.The numbers is the biggest one for me. At one point the MC is jumping, and exerting force to evade an enemy. this would be understandable, if the enemy wasn't even 2ft tall. 45 cm is 1.47 ft. Don't include numbers if they make no sense.
- Auri_Kvothe5mthCommented
things not even 1.5 ft tall. just punt it. into a tree. just like the squirrel. you can step over it. no need for acrobatics when the thing doesn't even reach your knees.
It was only 45 centimeters in height if one were to exclude its head. Shane exerted his force to jump over it, while twisting his body to thrust out the dagger, causing a deep wound, close to the neck. - Auri_Kvothe5mthCommented
this is different from what he said I the last chapter. Says he can use it at full strength for more than a minute.
He extracted the SoulStar Fragments from the corpses of the human traitors and used some of the SoulStar Fragments to replenish his rapidly drained Soul Power for the Heavenly Beast Physique. Using the Heavenly Beast Physique drained the Soul Power accumulated within the 6-Star Superior Constitution quickly. It was not instantaneous, but he could only utilize the Heavenly Beast Physique for a minute before the Soul Power within the Soultrait Symbol was drained. Fortunately, that changed by using SoulStar Fragments as a fuel. - Auri_Kvothe5mthCommented'Are we playing Undead Arise, or what?' Michael cursed in his mind, his head flicking to the back when he heard pained groans and desperate screams from the back.
- Auri_Kvothe5mthReplied to Ahharu
I found a few and don't know which I the right one
[It was a long time ago, on the Forgotten Shore. When we were enthralled by the Soul Devouring Tree, you told me about the Lineage Memory you had found in its branches. In its description… wasn't it said that the loathsome Thieving Bird had gone mad after seeing a glimpse of "unknown" frozen in the depths of Weaver's eye?] - Auri_Kvothe5mthReplied to
book or comic?
[It was a long time ago, on the Forgotten Shore. When we were enthralled by the Soul Devouring Tree, you told me about the Lineage Memory you had found in its branches. In its description… wasn't it said that the loathsome Thieving Bird had gone mad after seeing a glimpse of "unknown" frozen in the depths of Weaver's eye?] - Auri_Kvothe5mthReplied to Reader_of_Sorrows
what is LOTM?
[It was a long time ago, on the Forgotten Shore. When we were enthralled by the Soul Devouring Tree, you told me about the Lineage Memory you had found in its branches. In its description… wasn't it said that the loathsome Thieving Bird had gone mad after seeing a glimpse of "unknown" frozen in the depths of Weaver's eye?] - Auri_Kvothe5mthReplied to Falcon09
agreed
"That's because the military has a high base number. Besides, the real strong ones still come from martial arts halls. For example, Gale, the strongest man in Hua Xia. His Gale Martial Arts Hall is the number one martial arts hall in Hua Xia District. I dream of becoming a Gale warrior." - Auri_Kvothe5mthCommentedIt almost felt like the spaceship warped through space.
- Auri_Kvothe5mthCommentedThe spaceship could travel through vast distances with incredible velocity. Once the symbols etched all over the vessel were activated, it emanated an otherworldly hum, and the ring-like gate at its center would come to life, releasing a mesmerizing whirlwind of energy.
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- Auri_Kvothe7mthCommented
saying the name. stupid.
"Aiden, continue what you're doing, I'll hold him off," shouted Emma from far away, bow in hand. - Auri_Kvothe7mthCommented
*waiting for psyched_blade now*
Florida Man Equipped School Bus with Mini-Gun and Drove It on Highway. Wild Anaconda Got Run Over and Shot to Death. - Auri_Kvothe8mthCommentedThe dao avatar was a tall and slender young man in a robe. He had long vampire fangs and elf ears. However, his bright crimson pupils were the same as blood.