Review Detail of DFP_86 in Primordial Dimensions

This story is interesting and fit the authors universe. It contains another variation of pet beasts/soul sounds and world build that is really interesting. a Good story to read if you follow the author's other stories. However my criticism is that some parts feel rushed and that supporting characters (friends) one thing will be important end up being ignored and not refered again. the colleagues Olivia, Aimy and Leon disappeared in the story, and even Shane friends in the Elun race that really invest in him, are ignored when the calamities start to happen (no late story interaction with them when the system is failing and humanity is migrating, even though the Elun helped him and invested in him due to some foresight skill, it almost seems that Shane abandons them).