Abundance Every Year
No, world building included. The word mage/sorcerer/enchanter keeps interchanging. It first said magic affinity is born with it and next we know you can increase it. the sect leader was shocked that someone at enchanter lvl had let's say lvl 3 affinity when in the first chapters it was mentioned that the so called holy maiden had lvl 3 magic Affinity since she born like WTH.
first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense, don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains, make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power, don't give the skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to finding new way to make him strong and earn some money. if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.
This is a poorly written system novel with a mish mash of different fantasy genera's. Most people have read a system/gamer novel or fanfic before so should under stand the basics. This system could of made a good novel if the author had stuck to one fantasy genera. As things are at the 4th chapter I chose to quite reading. Character designs are weak and the introduction to the main character felt forced and rushed. World building is lacking and story development seems to follow the standard chines web novel format. The main character seems to be mentally unaffected in transmigrating into a new world and seems to have gone all in. Translation Quality Score 2 Stability of Updates Score 4 Story Development Score 3 Character Design Score 1 World Background Score 1 The total score 2.2
No variations in the power up, just MC training like an idiot for months getting random OP stuff which gives no sens of merit. Even worse, there's no consistency, whether it is in the power level names that keep changing (sorcerer, enchanter, mage,... not sure about mage but the first 2 are one and the same) or with MC's mentor treatment. MC's mentor has a huge wound that weakens him and will kill him. 1/ MC gets a potion that cures all wounds. 2/ MC don't want to give it to mentor because the potion that cures all wounds would only extend his life by a few days and might make him crazy. Because ??? 3/ MC gives it to mentor who's at death door and it can extend his life by 3 years. So why does it keep changing? If there's an excuse like "life energy can't be replenished", why does MC knows exactly how long that would extend his life while he has never learned anything about medecines/healing ? Moreover, so far all characters looks really stupid and stereotypical.
Translation and flow of story becomes horrible. Major chapters after 150 are messed up and some of which makes no sense. it was as if the translator created his own interpretation like what happened to the novel on "I can see hidden Hints". information and flow of story is messed up, especially on lifespans and the terms used to describe per stage. one moment it's 3000 years, the next it's 500, then the next time it's 1000. disappointing, as it had a lot of good potential. do not waste time past the chapter where he becomes the Eastern Emperor, just end it there for your sakes.
Bad, Like actually bad. The logic in this novel is non-existent, many things contradict each other, My brain hurts just from reading it. The translation is bad too, one second he is Lin Lei and another he is Linley. Many things don't make sense, There is no solid world background since it keeps getting shattered by either the extremely poor translation or nonsensical words by Author. There is also no Introduction so alot of things don't make sense. like the cultivation stages, what types of cultivation are there, where they are located at. Nothing at all.
Obligatory warning: I hate the translator because after being picked up, the first thing he did was to add privileged chapters. not even some mass release. Privileged chaoters right from the beginning. Now to the novel, Took a cliched story line and tried some new elements into it. many parts of story development and character building are done on the go. many parts tended to be redundant or extended in order to make it into a cliff.