Review Detail of West in Practicing Basic Sorcery for Billions of Times Made Me Invincible

This is a poorly written system novel with a mish mash of different fantasy genera's. Most people have read a system/gamer novel or fanfic before so should under stand the basics. This system could of made a good novel if the author had stuck to one fantasy genera. As things are at the 4th chapter I chose to quite reading. Character designs are weak and the introduction to the main character felt forced and rushed. World building is lacking and story development seems to follow the standard chines web novel format. The main character seems to be mentally unaffected in transmigrating into a new world and seems to have gone all in. Translation Quality Score 2 Stability of Updates Score 4 Story Development Score 3 Character Design Score 1 World Background Score 1 The total score 2.2