Reviews of Phone App: Portable Armory

Disclaimer: I didn't get too far into the novel. With that out of the way... This is a good novel with its potential dragged down by bad (2) technical writing, but the other aspects are passable (3), good (4), or can't be judged from how far I got/great (5). Writing Quality: Lots of grammatical errors and constantly changing pronouns. Sometimes the author even randomly calls the main character by a random name. Update Stability: Self-explanatory Story Development: Decently fast paced so it's not a slog. However, that fast pace makes it so that the events of the story aren't that fleshed out and seems rushed if you're used to longer, more descriptive novels. Character Design: The characters feels a bit flat. Their biggest downfall is that they are coldblooded murderers from the start, with no reaction to kills. However, the author is good at making them recognizable even when they haven't been named. World background: The system is good. I haven't gotten far enough to judge anything so 5 stars. Note: It appears that the GL/Yuri is only temporary before turning straight and het again. The author should comment if I'm wrong.

Gender bend from at chapter 37 good luck............ cffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

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You need to be a gun nut to connect with this novel. I hope the author could let the readers enjoy the novel by not letting them Google everything! It looks like the author expects the readers to know all the configuration of the blackhawks/rifles/smgs/vehicles. I had to Google everything that I didn't know from playing video games Needs work in grammar. This novel should be proofread. Aside from that, this novel is great. The author is a memelord. Lol.

Despite the flaws, it IS entertaining. -The grammar need some work. -The story is fast paced, and there is no clear goal for the protagonist aside from following the basic requirements of the app use. Chapter 3 contradict chapter 1 concerning the number of users. Not enough curiosity about the app, or the other users. Too much focus on the guns and battles. 1 everyday is pushing it too much, especially in the same city/area, and the lack of downtime, not even for bullets wounds. -The protagonist is lacking. He turned from an ordinary student into a mercenary with basic training without any reason. He became some capable of killing in cold blood and handle bullet wounds on his very first mission. It looks like it’s the same for the other app users The main girl is bland, and for someone who he is supposed to know for a while, their interactions are cringeworthy, like it’s the first time they are spending time together. -More physical description of the people and surroundings (especially the battlefields) would be nice. There is a surprisingly big bullet hole on a reinforced vehicle and it’s not described.

Wooooooaaahhh! I love the idea of this novel. It is indeed interesting and you guys will not disappoint by reading this novel. Good luck and God Bless author. 💜🦋

I am getting quite addicted to the system story and its plots, I have read many system comics, but this one is my first system novel, Specially I like the mc characteristics and his attitude and behavior one of the best read on Webnovel.

I'm addicted to this book it's the first novel i read whenever there's new chapters! I definitely have to check out his other works! Keep up the solid writing! And more chapters!! 😤😤🙏🙏

Nice concept and plot! This book is really intriguing and fun to read. I'm really interested on what's about to happen next. This book is captivating and definitely deserves more attention. Nice work👍👍👍

Best System i ever Read about. Story had potential but was bogged down by rushed writing and pacing. Full of Plotholes. Characters make no sense, act like Teenagers but kill without remorse. Story development is meh. I only read it because it is the only story with such a setting. 2/5 Had potential, got ruined by bad writing.

The novel is a great idea and has potential but it also has many flaws like the insane behavior of the mc along with the fact he is a student that magically knows how to behave like a soldier and use weapons like one and their are other issues but I’m not gonna get into those

Overall, this is a good novel and anyone who love guns will definitely like the novel. (if you came here to read the gender bender part, start reading at chapter 37 that's where the gender bender started)

Great book I would definitely suggest reading it. I told everyone I know to read it and they all loved it. It is so good my family wants to read it out loud on YouTube. So that even more people want to listen/read this book and support the author.

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I f**king tried to read it and can't understand a single thing. What is the nature of the system? How is every Tom, Dick and Jerry gained access to it? I mean seriously, the whole thing is a mess.

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All in all, a good story. Now to fill in the characters..................................................................................................................................................................................................

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It’s a good book but I have some problems -chapter update aren’t that much I’ve waited a week but not even one chap -I understand that u wanna make the characters cool but the drinking and the smoking part is kinda annoying me (not kinda, ALOT) -it would really help if u could post pictures of the stuff you include like the guns

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