Unleashed_Echo
The original character is well written but broken and too OP. Although exciting to see this strange development, it can lead to premature ending due to extremely fast power development. Please balance the character. The story and plot is great, keep up the good work author, I will cheer for u. The fast pace of chapter update is very much appreciated and hope that u can set a predefined chapter per week and follow a schedule henceforth as well.
I'm giving the story one star, not because it deserves it, but because I've seen way too many mindless five-star ratings, so this is for balance. If I were to give an honest opinion, I would give the story about three stars. The progression of power that the main character gets is way too fast, so it doesn't feel earned or satisfying. This becomes even more broken when the main character obtains an ability that lets him steal all the powers and skills of someone who he is fighting. At this point, his growth isn't something that people can look forward to. Why would they? He barely has to put in any effort. Especially since it can be used 4x a day. This problem is a rookie mistake. In addition, there are some aspects of the story that really don't make sense. Like the Great Sage ability which is given an A rating, and yet it is somehow able to replicate something with an SSS ranking. Literally makes zero sense. Another downside is that the story explains way too much about the background and game details. I can understand trying to help others who haven't read the original story, but this just drags out the process and makes it more tiresome for those who actually have. Y'know, the story's MAIN audience?
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i have not read it yet but one thing i hope is that the MC will focus a little on real life romance/familiy building unlike in the manhua after the MC gets his NPC wife he seems to stop caring about real life relationships other then this one thing about the original overgeared i liked everything else about it so im looking forward to reading this FF