BravoBuds
the best one piece fanfiction I have read so far. The character design and stroy development are superb. The story is not rushed so it makes for a stable devlopment. The only problem with story is that the MC doesn't have a clear goal for being a pirate and sailing the seas. He just picked a fight with kaido just because everyone in the new world decides to fight one of the yonko. Even so the writing quality is very good so we can enjoy the story even with the lack of goal for the MC.
Hey there.Definite give this a try its just too good.The beginning is not really great but trust me as the story goes it gets way better and i mean it.The story development,fruit utilization and characters are really satisfying and right now its the Marineford arc and he put the story up in a really unique way.There is also his heritage mystery which most authors try but it come out $#%t but he presented it really well.I have really no problem with it till now and the fight scenes are also Good.Keep it up π
Let's talk about this fanfic, personally I would divide it into 2 parts, the first part is not to my liking, I would say not at all, for various reasons that I already wrote throughout the first chapters, but, in the second part it improves drastically, there are interesting fights, character growth, I would have loved to have the rowen from chapter 100 in chapter 1, but I guess that's the character growth, I loved the second half of the fanfic, although the first part leaves me with a bitter taste, the I recommend? Yes, if you can turn off your brain temporarily it's a good read, the second half of the fanfic is worth it. (Sorry my bad grammar, i use google translate)
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writing quality: perfect grammar 5 stars stability of updates: superb he uploads 1-2 times a day regurly and once did 5 chapters at once 5 stars story development: one of the best I've ever seen, the story seems to be planned ahead and is executed beautifully 5 stars character design: first off amazing OC's they feel alive and with feelings, second, the already existing characters are shown how they are supposed to act 5 stars world background: normally just give 5 stars to those that show the world how it is, but this story builds on what is shown in the story and gives new and exciting elements to the world thus making the story fresh and unique even though it is a fanfic on an already created series overall amazing I strongly suggest you give it a try
The comedic moments present in this fanfic was top notch for me. And the way the characters are handled in the story was among the many reason to why I would reccomend it for anyone looking for a fanfic without an OP protagonist from the start(I'm not saying all stories written in this manner are bad).
thanks author ! interesting story![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] don't drop please[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
fun and fufilling story βΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊ
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