Reviews of One Piece: I Am Psychopath [Completed]
One Piece: I Am Psychopath [Completed]
VILLIAN_MAKER
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Hello there young un, it is I, the No Name Deity, and saw your work in my travels in the Multiversal land of novels. Here take this *thrusting my hand forward* "What is it, Sir Nameless Old Ancestor 999th Divine sky Samsara Nirvana" "Hmpphh, this is my form of encouragement for you" said No Name with a smug smirk. Then suddenly, the Old Ancestor open his hand above the hand of the [Redacted] and... Nothing, he gave nothing. Then suddenly the Old Ancestor run away while stealing the money of the poor mortal while he was occupied with the nothing he gave him "Hahahahaha, you thought it was me No Name, but it was me, Random Name, bwahahahahah!" said Random Name while running into the sunset with the poor mortal chasing after him full of tears their his eyes
It's a unique OP fanfic. The era, the author use are more than century before the current timeline 1390's. His system are good and overpowered. Also his crew are also good and not dumb or rebellious(hypnotized). The mc not really a psychopath but a chaotic evil. His personality are lacking too show, I hope author improve this. And his goal didn't state it clearly. The downside in this story are the pacing. Like the author shows spoilers already that it destroys mysteries and curiosity or excitement of a reader. Instead of spoiling in all things, you can change it by foreshadowing. Example in that part a navy come to his turf, next is going to sky island that we didn't what happened.
The first few chapter is good, the mc used every little means beyond human moral for his enjoyment and goal, using all his cheats. but it goes downhill with massive plotholes, forced logic about the power system and him suddenly not using his op cheats, at first he goes from lvl1 to 6 by hypnotizing the whole island population and all its visitor and suddenly not using it to lvl up. All in all I don't recommend it reading past chapter 15 and up. Kudos to the author for the first few enjoyable chapters and brilliant idea.
