LightningAsura
I had high hopes for this story, but... Chapters are waaay too short. Too many nonsensical rants sometimes lasting up to 2 chapters. An annoying AI. Confusing almost cultivation novel like babbling about his affinity training. At about Ch 60 the Author changes stats by /10...cause reasons. It was about there i dropped. Started out well and then somehow just got derailed.
I love the story the protagonist is involved in the world and is not really dumb or overly heroic or easily falling for and doing everything for women kbecause their women and he should’ the world gets a basic explanation at the start which gets more developed as the book goes on. Have not finished it yet but this is definitely e of my favourites!
The story should only be read with your brain off, also do not expect any depth to the MC and the side-cast is non-existent. Basically it really feels 2D which is sad cuz it does have potential, at least a little bit, if onlz Author gave more depth to the world he created. If this got rewritten with more side characters it would be 3.5~3.8, currently it is slightly less than 3.
I am on 66 and here it is what i thought. Its good.. Better than many novels on this site... Authors also did a good job but here are some problems. 1.Story seems more like summary. 2.Less of interactions with people or anyone. If i summarize all his interactions with other characters it will fit in 2~4 chapters so basically 64~62 chapter this guy talking to himself 3. Its hard to visualize... I was unable to visualize the village or the jungle... 4. No action... Every time you shows the result but no fighting scene. 5. Some Chapters are too short with fillers (I personally don't like 😂😂😂) Anyways Author good job but it can always be better...
I really like your work on this book as it is very good 👍 quality and very well presented. The Character of this story has already been through a lot and will still have to go through a lot more, but he has a strong 💪 will to persist. His nicest trait is that he doesn't just do dumb things but thinks about his every move 🤔. What i like the most is that it is not your average transmigration story where they are all more or less the same in their development. So go on an continue. If you haven't already read it then what are you even doing here go on and read it .🤗🤗🤗🤗😺😺😺😺👍👍👍👍👍👍👍