I am on 66 and here it is what i thought. Its good.. Better than many novels on this site... Authors also did a good job but here are some problems. 1.Story seems more like summary. 2.Less of interactions with people or anyone. If i summarize all his interactions with other characters it will fit in 2~4 chapters so basically 64~62 chapter this guy talking to himself 3. Its hard to visualize... I was unable to visualize the village or the jungle... 4. No action... Every time you shows the result but no fighting scene. 5. Some Chapters are too short with fillers (I personally don't like 😂😂😂) Anyways Author good job but it can always be better...
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