Reviews of No Otaku with Harem System (English Version)
No Otaku with Harem System (English Version)
Bukaro
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story is good for those who like the "crazy" protagonist, he is a selfish person who has several psychological problems, as he says the A in a chapter in the other he is saying B, but the good part is that the story is good because he it's crazy, whether we like it or not we're human and nice to see someone suffer, and there are parts you'll read you'll think he needs to go to a psychologist urgently but it's also funny, like those revenge manga where the hero goes insane for betrayal, difference is that the protagonist is bipolar (And the development is bad, as it gives the impression that it just changes personality, and doesn't change anything, it's not a real development)
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After reading this novel I started hating the stupid and arrogant system users. I like this novel really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really very very very very very very very very much. The plot is very very interesting and the different point of views are very well written. Awesome is the only word that can describe the MC. It would have been amazing if I could be in MC's place. Only thing I'll say is author is a fellow man of culture. Hats off to you bro. YOU are my favorite author. MC is the perfect combination of tsundere and yendere. Just what we need.
The MC is precise as the author describes and isn't a complete Buffon. The harem actually has personality and there's actual plot and world-building. (As chaotic as it is) Overall, if you're looking for a novel to excite your heart for more and a harem with actual depth added. Then read the novel and support the author
I've read all the chapters in 4 days and I must say. This is a pretty good fanfic but there are some reasons why I have migraines ha get it migraine because the mc gets migraines well ignore that but 1st reason is that author doesn't like correcting the he,she,I,him,her,and etc so basically I get confused with who is who but i understand that its because author translated it from spanish. 2nd reason is that there is so much narrative that most things there shouldn't even need to be said so basically it sometimes gets boring and also it would be great if there were more 3rd pov of other characters so it shows they have some importance to the mc or story. well tbh I don't really care after all I came here for the harem tag so author if u are willing to add one more character to help the mc it should be echidna from re:zero(i read in a chapter the name echidna but is it that echidna or another echidna?)but yeah that's all but I want more chapters pls author.
Oof. It's really hard to write review for this fanfic, since it felt like a trip. My bad, I just couldn't take anymore around 30ish chapters. Twice. So my review is up to that part + some skimmed later chapters to make sure it doesn't become any better(in my opinion of course). Spoiler: no it does not. As people already stated, this reads as a Diary of mental asylum patient, who becomes more and more deranged with each chapter. P.S. Considering everything, I wouldn't be surprised if ending would be simple: "Lin Ruoxi", gal in the bar at the beginning of the fanfic, spiked MC's drink. And now he is hallucinating, lying in bath full of ice, with few missing inner organs.
