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Oof. It's really hard to write review for this fanfic, since it felt like a trip. My bad, I just couldn't take anymore around 30ish chapters. Twice. So my review is up to that part + some skimmed later chapters to make sure it doesn't become any better(in my opinion of course). Spoiler: no it does not. As people already stated, this reads as a Diary of mental asylum patient, who becomes more and more deranged with each chapter. P.S. Considering everything, I wouldn't be surprised if ending would be simple: "Lin Ruoxi", gal in the bar at the beginning of the fanfic, spiked MC's drink. And now he is hallucinating, lying in bath full of ice, with few missing inner organs.

No Otaku with Harem System (English Version)

Bukaro

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Due to my lack of writing experience, I made a monologue the first 45 chapters, from chapter 45 I focus on the development of plot, dialogues and interactions, sorry for the problem.