Review Detail of AcheronMain in No Otaku with Harem System (English Version)

I've read all the chapters in 4 days and I must say. This is a pretty good fanfic but there are some reasons why I have migraines ha get it migraine because the mc gets migraines well ignore that but 1st reason is that author doesn't like correcting the he,she,I,him,her,and etc so basically I get confused with who is who but i understand that its because author translated it from spanish. 2nd reason is that there is so much narrative that most things there shouldn't even need to be said so basically it sometimes gets boring and also it would be great if there were more 3rd pov of other characters so it shows they have some importance to the mc or story. well tbh I don't really care after all I came here for the harem tag so author if u are willing to add one more character to help the mc it should be echidna from re:zero(i read in a chapter the name echidna but is it that echidna or another echidna?)but yeah that's all but I want more chapters pls author.