Satan03
This novel is pretty good, have good potential but I only have a slight problem with the power levels and I write this to see if the author can explain them, I mean the stars powers level is pretty easy to understand, what I don't understand is how it correlate with the system, the part of the elements and bloodline limit all good but I don't really understand how goes strength and mana, for example, they have to get to 100 before you advance a star? It isn't really explained or I don't really understand it. I also sugest putting the star level in the system to make it more clear. All this are personal opinion, apart from this the novel is pretty good I recommend to read it. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's decent, I guess. It's not cancer and fun to read for a webnovel. Academically speaking, this would be below medium. But we're not here to talk about all that. One reminder I want you guys to know, though. You're better off not reading the comments of the beginning chapters. I legitimately believe that most of those who have commented are incels or aren't far from being one.
chaps lock up early, which seems to be a mistake. the world building is good, but the writing is a bit weak, although it gets better. a lot gets repeated early on and the pacing is slow. I'm around ch45 and the language took a big shift where the writing becomes eloquent to the point that it is unnatural. it is ok to use exam words occasionally for flavor, but overuse just makes me think content is being written by a robot.