Reviews of Natsu The Supreme Overlord
Natsu The Supreme Overlord
The_God_Asura
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I'm just reviewing my story, if you want a Dark Natsu and a harem, you'll like this story, my language is not English so I'm sorry if the grammar gets bad, I'm trying to improve
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Well, the stability of updates is quite hard to tell as you have barely posted any chapters. But I have to say, I really REALLY, enjoy this story thus far. I have high hopes for this novel, and you will probably get better at writing as time goes on, but for now, the only thing that is really lacking, is the grammar. Though there is quite a few novels with much less grammar. I sincerely hope that you continue writing this.
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pdates getting slower.... Pls more updates im craving for more........ I always put stones so you can update fast but it seems its getting slower instead. Hahaπππππππππππππ ππππππππππππππ ππππππππππππππ ππππππππππππππ...πππππππππππππ ππππππππππππππ ππππππππππππππ πππππππππππππππ
I really like this story so far! An alternate universe where the Fairy Tail Guild show's it's 'human nature'. Natsu doing a Tokyo Ghoul Episode 12 moment. (Realization!) Natsu stops being an Airheaded protagonist. Natsu Unlocking his true potential. Natsu becoming 'evil' to attain what he will want/desires. Finding out his older brother is Zeref. Not being a dick to his older bro because he gained power. (For some reason, a lot of novels like doing that) Revenge! (Hopefully in the next 1-3 chapters) Dislike: Doesn't know the difference between [He/She] All of that was REALLY unnecessary (Below). Just say they arrived, most people here watch Fairy Tail. We could have gotten more out of the chapters instead of these fillers. :c The first was Ajeel Ramal, or better known as 'King of the Desert' (2 Paragraph's Later...) The second was August or better known as the "Magical King" (2 Paragraph's Later...) The third was God Serena or better known as the strongest mage of the Ishgar mainland. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This is Bradman or better known as the 'Reaper'. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This Era Dimaria Yesta or better known as 'Valkyrie' (2 Paragraph's Later...) This was Invel Yura also known as Winter General (2 Paragraph's Later...) This is Jacob Lessio. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This Young is Larcade Dragneel or better known as the 3rd strongest member of the Spriggans behind Irene and August. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This was Wall Eehto or better known as "The Adjudicator." (2 Paragraph's Later...) This is Neinhart. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This is Irene Belserion the strongest woman of the Spriggans and the Queen of Dragons. (2 Paragraph's Later...) (Filled a whole chappy in total)
Im really frustrated of this novel, the idea behind it is soo good but the author ****ed it up by his grammar aghhhhhπ€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬ i love how the mc is introduced into reality and the author took the time too develop him but the ****ing grammar!!!!! Im not a hater btw thats way i rated it 4.2 Author here are some mistakes that you couls fix that are happening in every chapter btw these are not the only ones but they are the easiest to fix (i dont understand way you make these mistakes at every sentence, this is something that middle schoolers learn) Ok let me tell you how to use he and him please only use them when you are talking about a man character You could do this Random guy 1:" Hey did you know that this guy got a magical pet?"*points at Natsu* Random guy 2:"Natsu has a pet?? I didn't know that" or you do this Randome guy 2:" he has a pet??? I didn't know that (to put it simple please dont put she on men characters ) here is how you use him: The pet belongs to HIM!!! Not the pet belongs to her you will use her when we talk about a female character. Please dont make these mistakes again if you fix them the novel would be soo much easier to read and not get cancer in every sentence. How to use they, them and theirs: You use they when we want to tell something about a grupe ofpeople likethis They have a large guild building. For them you could use it like this The guild building belongs to THEM *points at a grupe of people* For their you could use it like this: It is THEIR guild building *points at randome guild member For theirs use it like this The Guild building is theirs these last two are confused but if you make a mistake its ok please edit your chapters soon
To lazy write anything. Just want more chapters and fast update!! ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
