Review Detail of FrostFire in Natsu The Supreme Overlord

Item: Natsu The Supreme Overlord
Rating: 2.6

Review detail

FrostFireLv125yrFrostFire

I like the concept of this fanfiction. However, it's such a shame that some parts of the story are grammatically unreadable. I'm not saying that this fanfiction is bad, it's just that I hope that the author will improve his/her writing quality.

Natsu The Supreme Overlord

The_God_Asura

Liked by 8 people

Replies3

DevinDevinLv5DevinDevin

Yeah it gets confusing, And it doesn't seem to be improving

5yr

GhostyXXXLv5GhostyXXX

The he and she errors are really killing it for me. The story is actually decent, but the grammar is horrendous. Hope author can fix this issue.

5yr

FrostFireLv12FrostFire

I...give up...the writing quality is getting worse and the unreadable parts in each chapter are increasing.

5yr