Review Detail of aSleepyPenguin in Natsu The Supreme Overlord

I really like this story so far! An alternate universe where the Fairy Tail Guild show's it's 'human nature'. Natsu doing a Tokyo Ghoul Episode 12 moment. (Realization!) Natsu stops being an Airheaded protagonist. Natsu Unlocking his true potential. Natsu becoming 'evil' to attain what he will want/desires. Finding out his older brother is Zeref. Not being a dick to his older bro because he gained power. (For some reason, a lot of novels like doing that) Revenge! (Hopefully in the next 1-3 chapters) Dislike: Doesn't know the difference between [He/She] All of that was REALLY unnecessary (Below). Just say they arrived, most people here watch Fairy Tail. We could have gotten more out of the chapters instead of these fillers. :c The first was Ajeel Ramal, or better known as 'King of the Desert' (2 Paragraph's Later...) The second was August or better known as the "Magical King" (2 Paragraph's Later...) The third was God Serena or better known as the strongest mage of the Ishgar mainland. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This is Bradman or better known as the 'Reaper'. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This Era Dimaria Yesta or better known as 'Valkyrie' (2 Paragraph's Later...) This was Invel Yura also known as Winter General (2 Paragraph's Later...) This is Jacob Lessio. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This Young is Larcade Dragneel or better known as the 3rd strongest member of the Spriggans behind Irene and August. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This was Wall Eehto or better known as "The Adjudicator." (2 Paragraph's Later...) This is Neinhart. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This is Irene Belserion the strongest woman of the Spriggans and the Queen of Dragons. (2 Paragraph's Later...) (Filled a whole chappy in total)