Reviews of Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi
Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi
Iampoorguy
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
While this looks to be a decent story, currently it is unreadable, its one thing to translate, its another to not even understand how grammer works, clearly author knows chinese yet not english. Overall I want to read this but the editing/grammer makes me unable to.
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gramar is not exactly great but readable. Due to the fact that mc never tries to change stuff for the better to preserve cannon, yet constantly does huge plays that would completly break any chance of cannon in a sane world the story ends up being just frustrating. however due to kakashi's growth i keep coming back for more hoping that with all this power he'll actualy change something worthwhile.. well there is a couple changes but these changes are with some exeptions, not changes most people care about. but yeah it's not all bad as it does make me continiue reading it though it makes me wonder if i have masochistic tendencies as the predominant emotion i get while reading this is frustration.
Is this Naruto story or cultivation story?? And Kakashi of this story is a joke even more so than cannon.. He knows the danger coming with Akatsuki and Uchiha Madara. . Then there are the Okutsuki clan ,and you are showing that even after knowing this he still struggles with Jugo.. And seriously what did you do with the flying thunder God, he can only mark with mangekyu sharingan, it is one of the most stupid thing in any fanfic I have read.. In the 4 shinobi war, it is shown that both Tobirama Senju and Minato Namikaze can put the shinki (formula) of Hirashin with one touch but you made it excessively complicated for no reason whatsover.. At his age All the Kage and both Sasuke and Naruto were S rank or even more powerful and he is pathetic.. And when you sealed the chakra of sharingan how can he go blind in one eye, what type of logic did you use?? He was jonin at what 12 or 13 ? With sage mode and flying thunder God he should be high s rank now.. And one more thing what is this Milineum sword? You did not even give the white chakra of the Hatake clan. At the age of 21 he should be atleast kage level or on the level of Hashirama Senju.
the MTL is okay compared to others.Story Development: the pacing is fast enough. MC doesn't like changing canon stuff that much so I gave it below average score.CD: Everyone sounds like a caricature. I skip most of the interactions because I cringe in Chinese. US: 5 stars for this one. You could hate CN Novels all you want, but their updates is hella fast.WB: Well it's a fanfic. nothing new so average score from me.
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Pros: The world building is very good. You get updates every day. The main character has no personality, he's incredibly boring to follow around, along with all of the side characters. The plot is only interesting because it's in the Naruto world. No character development or depth in the story. I read the novel on MTL and once you get to the 4th Great Shinobi War, it gets far worse. On top of that, power scaling is incredibly inconsistent. On top of that, the MC gets abilities and wins fights too easily.
