you should really consider killing yourself

he ain't tho, he's got the rokushiki abilities, while Roger only had haki

Also, she will most definitely get better at this, so please stay tuned for this.

But then again, my OC is 18, and fresh out of High School, so I can't see a high schooler dealing with the underworld effectively, even with All for One training her. On top that, she was exclusively experimented on, she wasn't given any experience dealing with the criminal underworld

Pros: The world building is very good. You get updates every day. The main character has no personality, he's incredibly boring to follow around, along with all of the side characters. The plot is only interesting because it's in the Naruto world. No character development or depth in the story. I read the novel on MTL and once you get to the 4th Great Shinobi War, it gets far worse. On top of that, power scaling is incredibly inconsistent. On top of that, the MC gets abilities and wins fights too easily.

Read the creator's thoughts for an explanation.