Reviews of Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi
Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi
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Might be just me but the novel is started turning out to be a cultivation novels with good plot at the beginning and later on went a massive dive in the gutter. Reason being MC not using his knowledge, book about future stolen, which he could have put somewhere else but nooo. The last thing that ticked me off the most is the used of ninjutsu and seals, it made it seem like the author just downgrades the MC for no reason and unlocked his "Power" on stupid scenes. The translator did great, but the author is quite delusional in the case of the Shinobi world. I get that this is a fanfiction, but he should do some research beforehand.
It was good an felt like an interesting read for a first few chapters. I don't mean to insult the author because of his grammar but he really really needs a better translator. It was acceptable at first but the translation kept getting worse. Its better to take your time and post 1 chapter per week rather than do daily but a clearly inferior chapter. Kakashi is getting too op at 18. Naruto and Sasuke had excellent genetics + power given to them by the Sage Of Six Paths whereas this Kakashi is able to do literally anything and even mimic other Kage's special jutsus. If you want to build hype then its fine but never make the character too op quickly otherwise people will lose interest in your fic. There are many decisions made by the op which defies logic and makes us cringe. So overall its a 2/5 for this
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This seems to be translated because its not readable. The grammar is just not there and it doesn't make sense half the time. Missing words, words used in the wrong context its just lazy. If you are going to write a fanfiction you could at least get some knowledge of cannon that is right. People who are reviewing 5 star must not be able to read.
Kakashi has a perfect fking memory... No way he's gonna forget stuff.. He just wrote the whole Naruto plot in a note book and now orochimaru is in control of things.. I knew i shouldn't have read this.. It was going perfect but NOOOO... Author has to Nerf kakashi.. It's like those cultivation novels where Chinese authors Nerf mcs when they're out of plot๐คฎ๐คฎ
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It is really disappointing MC links with Mei who is way more annoying than in the original plot and even suffers damage almost dying numerous times due to her. Yet he still calls himself cold-blooded, Mei has tried to kill him too but he doesn't care at all for revenge and he says he hasn't got affection. To be honest from around chapter 184 Mei starts showing up more and also she starts weakening the MC and his beliefs. She is more of an obstacle than a help. Furthermore according to all the events an collisions with Kirigakure and Mei specifically I can name a 3 times he should have killed her in the first 184 chapters: When they deal with the Cerberus beast and she tries to kill him there - Though she did heal him afterwards When she entered Ushizokagure trying to steal the inheritance and he didn't at least try to stop her knowing he himself is an Uzumaki When she almost makes him seem as a spy or traitor by talking nicely to him when he is on missions. Furthermore MC is surprisingly near perfect when she is not involved and takes care of Naruto Hugo and Karing, masters senjutsu, seals his sharingan, learns flying thunder god and much more!
