This seems to be translated because its not readable. The grammar is just not there and it doesn't make sense half the time. Missing words, words used in the wrong context its just lazy. If you are going to write a fanfiction you could at least get some knowledge of cannon that is right. People who are reviewing 5 star must not be able to read.
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