Review Detail of RaydenDarkus in Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi

It was good an felt like an interesting read for a first few chapters. I don't mean to insult the author because of his grammar but he really really needs a better translator. It was acceptable at first but the translation kept getting worse. Its better to take your time and post 1 chapter per week rather than do daily but a clearly inferior chapter. Kakashi is getting too op at 18. Naruto and Sasuke had excellent genetics + power given to them by the Sage Of Six Paths whereas this Kakashi is able to do literally anything and even mimic other Kage's special jutsus. If you want to build hype then its fine but never make the character too op quickly otherwise people will lose interest in your fic. There are many decisions made by the op which defies logic and makes us cringe. So overall its a 2/5 for this