Reviews of Naruto: The Shinobi Genius

Writing Quality all right Stability of Updates Updates 1 a day Story Development To Fast Character Design little to none World Background it naruto

It is going in a good direction. The main character is not op from the start and he should become steadily stronger. I suggest that he learn trap and tactics from the library or shikamaru. He should observe and counter attack different fight.

I will give a review in this story. I read this ff 5 months ago this is the first naruto ff i read the 2nd is holy joker naruto ff. This story is good although not perfect some grammar and mistakes but looking positivity i can say its readable and there's a point in this story unlike other ff where they story development is good at start later on some author destroy it or messed up the story. Author can you make another naruto ff to prove that you improve. Because some comment bashing on you

My God I had actually dropped reading this , I was kinda bored so i was browsing old books in the library and stumbled upon this book, but I must say this book is "AWESOME".

I think I was pretty ****ed up in the head to read more to chapter 20 couple of months ago, now that I tried to read it again I see how painful to read the fic become after chapter five. you can clearly see author dont know what he's found when he started writing and even if he become better in the more advanced chapters the first 10 chapters is a rule I abide now. if the first 10 chapter are shit I stop read in and that fanfic for me is completely shit so to not waste time with so many good story waiting in my list

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can i just say.. i fuckin love this haha and that story boi i was crying thank you author thank you.. now im gonna put a bunch of dots so i can post this .................................................................

I'm happy to see that novel to the end it's the first novel I finished from hundreds of novels think you for writing a good novel and you didn't dropped it in the middle 😭😭❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Me: pls no harem, no harem, no harem *sees the no harem **t* *me shouting in happiness* i cant believe how many harem stories they are, it's starting to get hard to find books with no harem in them, literally!!!

It is a great novel I didn't like some chapters but I also understand that it was cause the mc is not god and as the story devlope u will understand it In short I loved the novel Great job author Waiting for ur another novel

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Well story was interesting at start but system is never used much other than showing status. It gets generic as it goes forward. The writing is ok with little grammar mistakes and wrong spellings. The side characters are not developed. Mc is Scum who uses everyone and says it's for reason,will make up for it. His personality is whack goes from neutral to evil in 1 chap. Author has pinned good reviews XD

Please continue this novel.

It's awesome. I read Dream to immortality and I was depressed. But this story is awesome. It is on par with LLH/soul system/hokage ryo's path. In overall I really love this story and deserves 5 star.oh yeah it would be better if he doesn't kill innocent.

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Trach and waste of time for these resons: 1- stupied MC and characters 2- the story is going too fast 3- bad fights end in two seconds 4- all the fouce on the MC And the list goes on insted of reading this trach I recommend to read these fan fiction novels: 1- HP magical journey (HARRY POTTER) 9.5/10 MUST READ!! 2- famous police detective in detective world (CONAN) 9/10 3-

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Dialogues are too forced and story flow doesn't seem seemless. I'm out!!