Review Detail of Apocalypse_ in Naruto: The Shinobi Genius

Add more colours to the dialogues. They always seem bland. Without emotions. Also, in dialogues like, 'So you don't like me huh' 'No that's not what I mean' 'I'm just joking' If you add more details in between them, they won't seem so...plain and boring. It seems like you don't really like these dialogues much and only do them for there to be some variety of elements in the story. Something that connects the previous and further scenes. Even till now, the relation between Naruto and Hinata(albeit much better than before)seems unnatural and weird as if there's not really much love between them. More like a one-side love actually. It feels as if, if Naruto finds Hinata a bit annoying one day he'll simply kill her off and move on. Your Naruto in this story seems like an emotionless robot with a mission protocol for domination and adventure. You have a chance for developing him in a new world and I suggest you do. This story will become a beautiful read. This is my sincere request.