HolyOniiSama
I'm basically bleeding my heart reading this, no offense to you @HolyOniiSan (i know you only uploading this into webnovel). so many misinformation, messed up timelines, but let's just pretend that this is just an AU Naruto Fanfiction. and then, the grammar, well it's not really a problem since I'm not that good either. but the main problem is, even though I already read many xianxia or cultivation novel, i.JUST.can't swallow the raw cringe cliches in this novel, Naruto with Xianxia vibe just not a good match up, AT ALL. the more I read it the more my heart bleed, I keep trying push my heart to read this because many reviews keep saying this is "great novel" and what not, even the reuploader (can I call you that? @HolyOniiSama) said that it will have "godly" arcs later on. But even after 38 chapter i just can't find the charm of this novel, and sadly i have to said goodbye, it's just too much for me. but hey, maybe this is not just my cup of tea. and I will end this review here. oh, and dude, keep uploading, maybe there are many who likes this novel.
Started out as a unique AU that was looking to really good, but around chapter ~300 is starting going downhill real fast. The MC goes from mocking the enemies that they sound like villians cuz they talk too much to end up doing that exact thing. Towards the end all the "cannon" main events happen and some are even preventable if the MC would take his fights seriously. Seems like the author got lazy or found writing a good AU novel was to hard towards the end which is a shame
World building and characters are Just terrible might be ok Just for causal anime fan Who barely knows whats going On in naruto. Also main character seems to be egocentric hipocrite that gets stronger no matter what because plot armor or made up excuses by writer. Read only if you dont care about lore of original work and how the powers work there as this fanfic does not know if it wants to be chinesse cultivation or actually stick to chakra or other power style in later arcs.
it's an awesome novel with a powerful MC and training to become even more powerful, he transmigrated into Naruto to the second shinobi war. Overall, this is a novel worth reading, with an MC who has a goal to become the most powerful and stay with his wife. PS: at the end of Naruto, he passes in One Piece for a hundred chapters but returns at the end to the Naruto world.
I remember reading this fic in comrademao site and it was great but I lost interest after 200th chapter or something it was really great there but the grammar totally sucked but now I am again getting fired up to read this as this is great here,over all keep going dude and I will keep throwing power stones on you
this is it 😍 this is the master piece that I have finally found after all this time really amazing story line and even character that have a very interesting and even amazing plot even much much better than the original plot if someone ask me that which one is better I without even hesitating would certainly say that this is the best plot in Naruto fan fic that I have ever read