maxphantom
It is the same cliche` beginning, but if you can look past that the novel is one of the best fanfic's in this genre. Furthermore, the novel developing well; I can't wait to see how the story develops. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I really liked this Novel. Good job.πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ€π€
God awful start to a story. Stuffing so much forced tragedy down an audiences throat. No natural feel at all, if you gotta do all that to make this story happen it just ain't meant to be. Letting the webnovel readers control the direction of the story is another red flag. I know where this story is eventually headed.
mano to gostando da historia, so não gostei muito da divisão da kurama porque ela é puro chakra então se tu para e pensa a alma é o propio chakra ja que chakra é energia fisico e mental, mais isso pode ser iginorado, so gostaria que naruto não perdoaçe ele no final odeia fanfic que naruto perdoa toda mizera que fiseram.
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