Reviews of Naruto secret world
Naruto secret world
Azure_warrior
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Everything you need to know about this story: 1. The name of the hero... A setting in which everyone has Japanese names. Finn... Anderson... Words are superfluous here. 2. In each new sentence and/or paragraph, the name of the hero. It's like I didn't understand his name the first time. 3. Another slave of the system.
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for a very interesting storyline, with a mixture of solo leveling comics, and other Japanese anime, your novel really interests me in terms of story background... but unfortunately the writing style is not good and even the children's stories before bed are better... and I hope in the future the writing style can be improved, and if possible don't force the story, because when I read this novel, I read without expression, yes even though there are some interesting chapters. This is just my advice, thank you. Have a nice day!!
First of all congratulations for finishing your story because many would have simply abandoned or deleted it. for my part, better write your story and finish it after doing a rewrite to improve it by re-reading it yourself as a reader than spending 1 year out of 10 chapters just because you want perfection. with regard to the powerful protagonist I recommend that you make a list of the different capacities that you intend to give him then try to imagine the end this will allow you to better manage the Mc Too powerful, avoided making him weak without valid reason and also he must not be the type I save and forgive everyone because it is the right thing to do. I wish you good luck with your next story.
(As of 30 ch) A very good ff, with a decent mc...kaguya as first waifu(what do you need more?), lemons with kaguya(no sane person could resist it), though there are grammatical guys, but it is ff and our dao of heart and language has transcended all concepts...So, just go and read it....a very nice ff. Good interactions between characters...op mc...most likely be harem...I am sold.
This one have an English name in a Japanese novel and mc is just a system slave, with penalties like getting killed or 3rd limb or arm being cut off etc and then there are many plot holes. I had high expectations from this from the synopsis but it's like one of the best example of not judging the book by it's synopsis.
The author's naming sense is weird. I mean naming a guy in japanese based world as Finn Anderson? naming his system Mia? there's hundreds name better than that, idk. The reason him getting 'Reincarnated' is non-existent. The reason 'mr.Author' reincarnated him is because his life is 'suck?' 'bad?' despite having good karma?. I mean, having your crush going out w/ another dude is normal so to say. there's millions of people that live more difficult life than him. and him suddenly getting attention of the so called 'Supreme God' is Laughable. Lastly, the MC is slave to his own system. Despite saying ' My wish is to live my life to the fullest '. He's also act like a kid getting a toy that his parents bought. he didn't even think twice about wanting to reincarnated into the world of naruto. He's basically a teenager that still ignorant about the harshness of the Reality.
