Review Detail of Nix_Phoenix in Naruto secret world

First of all congratulations for finishing your story because many would have simply abandoned or deleted it. for my part, better write your story and finish it after doing a rewrite to improve it by re-reading it yourself as a reader than spending 1 year out of 10 chapters just because you want perfection. with regard to the powerful protagonist I recommend that you make a list of the different capacities that you intend to give him then try to imagine the end this will allow you to better manage the Mc Too powerful, avoided making him weak without valid reason and also he must not be the type I save and forgive everyone because it is the right thing to do. I wish you good luck with your next story.