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Worse than Google translator quality. Each chapter has on average 10-20 inconsistencies and common sense took a hike and never came back and mc somehow gets items or some stuff without explanations and lets not forget that mc is a poor kid without family who lived in a hut and lets not ask why said hut had various rooms, a bathroom and a shower with running water.... lets also not mention how (Said by author) mc defeated 3 adult ninjas when his stats says that even a 7 years old civilian kid is stronger and faster and that a punch from a 10 years old can kill you...
Yah segini aja menurut saya..... MC terlalu bergantung dengan sistem dan ah entahlah makin saya baca makin ga jelas alurnya jadi tambah pusing sayaπ Saran saya tolong MC jangan terlalu nafsuan jadi kurang enak saya bacanya Tapi terserah lah setiap penulis memiliki fetish tersendiri melampiaskan keinginan imajinasinya sendiri ketika menulis... Yah... Itu aja
The amount of mental damage I took even reading the first few chapters is truly unpresidented. Imagine if a wish fullfilment story was written by a child who refused to check for spelling. Oh, and rhe MCs name is completely not fitting for thr setting, on par with names like βBob Uchihaβ and βJim Uzumakiβ. Drinking a lead cocktail will be less damaging to your IQ than reading this story.