Iampoorguy
I rated this higher earlier, but I have to drop some scores from Story development and character design. It's more of an MC problem, I just got tired of the "clone" BS. The clones ruined this fic for me, they have so much screentime and doesn't make sense. They also rant the same diatribe towards the MC. Oh yeah, MC's clones have different personalities btw for whatever reason author never explained and simply left with "just because."
I didn't sleep just to finish reading this. ➡️ Writing Quality: 4/5 *Not bad just few minor mistakes but I'm not a perfectionist and as long as I can read the tex just fine then it's totally fine with me.➡️ Story Development and Character Design: 4/5 * I enjoy how he wasn't op immediately at the beginning and so far there's no major time skip where the characters jump from age 10 to 16 so I'm happy with that cause I can read how he struggles with obtaining his techniques and it's so hilarious for me how he has this villainous mindset and keep complaining about shi**y things he encountered.➡️ Updating Stability: 4/5➡️World Background: 5/5* Well it's Naruto World so ❤️
A very good novel that talks about Shinobi from the enko generation Iruka and Shisui have cheats that collect techniques, he can't easily collect techniques, the story is not Hasty although she is a translator, but the translator is very creative and the story is amazing and very funny رواية جيدة جدا تتكلم عن شينوبي من جيل انكو وايروكا وشيسوي لديه غش يجمع التقنيات لايمكنه ان يجمع التقنيات بسهولة القصة ليست متسرعة مع انها مترجمة لكن المترجم ابدع جدا والقصة مذهلة ومضحكة جدا
Una historia interesante, es realmente entretenido y la escritura no está mal, es largo pero los capítulos no son muy largos, por lo que se puede leer en su totalidad en unos pocos días, si se quieren más capítulos el autor tiene una cuenta de patreon donde tiene más capítulos, esta cuenta tiene el mismo nombre que su cuenta en esta plataforma, también disponible en otras plataformas, el autor siempre se encuentra con el mismo nombre. Apoyo a esta historia, muy buena. (Soltando pedo arcoiris ya que no sabía que escribir jajaja)
probably the better one of Chinese fic/tl here on WN. The Writing(3*) was okay for a translation, but it doesn't feel seamless in some parts. The Story Development (5*) was on point, it's a Self Insert OC of Hayate's cousin. Not Overpowered but have cheats, I almost dropped it at ch 1 due to the devour cheat, but it's overnerfed and has lots of limitations. The characters' (4*) personality somehow stick to the original source and wasn't dumb down to make MC standout. MC do have some certain CN cliche mannerisms, but idk if it's the translator's efforts or the OG Author, but he/she/they made it work. MC is funny and witty. Updates (5*) are consistent so far. World Background (5) It's detailed enough for the Narutoverse to be more expounded compared to the original, but also not written in a verbose manner so it's easy to read.
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