Review Detail of Humbuub in Naruto: Konoha's Kanpu

probably the better one of Chinese fic/tl here on WN. The Writing(3*) was okay for a translation, but it doesn't feel seamless in some parts. The Story Development (5*) was on point, it's a Self Insert OC of Hayate's cousin. Not Overpowered but have cheats, I almost dropped it at ch 1 due to the devour cheat, but it's overnerfed and has lots of limitations. The characters' (4*) personality somehow stick to the original source and wasn't dumb down to make MC standout. MC do have some certain CN cliche mannerisms, but idk if it's the translator's efforts or the OG Author, but he/she/they made it work. MC is funny and witty. Updates (5*) are consistent so far. World Background (5) It's detailed enough for the Narutoverse to be more expounded compared to the original, but also not written in a verbose manner so it's easy to read.