Reviews of Naruto: immortal Ninja

5 Stars because I want to give 5 stars hahhahahahhahaahha

Thanks to the author for this top book, I really liked it, especially because at the age of 9 he doesn’t kick kage like a genin, and the characters are well written. I hope you don’t drop the book and release more chapters, and I, in turn, will give you my stones and an assessment

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Really like the pacing of the story as the OC. OC is pretty fleshed out and has a very methodical outlook on what he needs to do to succeed as well as believable building of relationships with the other characters. I want to apologize and hope my bad luck streak doesn’t continue because I added this to my library. I say that because my library is filled with dropped stories that had great potential but were dropped. Please break this streak author. Thank you for your time

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Isso é muito bom, eu diria que é perfeitamente equilibrado em todos os aspectos, o ritmo não é muito lento mas também não é apressado, o protagonista usa sua inteligência e não desnecessariamente OP desde o início, construção de mundo interessante então isso tem muito potencial, a escrita do autor também é acima da média.

Espero que continue tendo atualizações, e obrigado por postar esta obra. ..................................................................

is it dropped [img=Cries] It has such a good start

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Perfect. Nice job. Thanks... GRoll no groob, grab do tood

the story is good. You should try something like patreon on this fic.

Very good, and certainly worth following. Is it the best fanfic I’ve read? No it isn’t. But it is well above average in all aspects. I’m excited to see how the plot progresses and how the author improves. All around excellent, solid 8.7/10.

So far(22 chapters) the MC is a calm person and is going for maximum growth before jumping into things. It is very enjoyable

Please make passage during dialogues. Something like that, you know? - "speech" - Character A - "speech" - Character B

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