Reviews of Naruto: Family System
Naruto: Family System
SoftCrow
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Otro fanfic del monton... ¿Con un Uchiha como protagonista? Si, que aburrido ya hay mil más... NOOOO!!! ESTE ES EL MEJOR FANFIC DE UN UCHIHA QUE HE LEIDO HASTA EL MOMENTO, SIMPLEMENTE ESPECTACULAR ¡LÉELO!! NO PIERDAS MAS TU TIEMPO Y COMIENZA YA!!
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I fully support the author 'softcrow' here... Although it's true that this guy is stealing someone's work, it's also true that 'softcrow' translates it for us to read it and also corrected the grammar... I mean.. Who tf are ye cang, linguang, and all these Chinese characters? 😭 I can't read the mtl... It's downright horrendous.. I'd rather read it from here🖖😇
Honestly i have see a few reviews about stolen work or whatever. I personally haven’t been able to see it, the mtl they refer to, seem similar, but this is way better put together. It does feel like a chinese/mtl novel kinda thing. But it isnt that bad, quite thrilling and the mc seems somewhat competent. Ofc the “villans” are dumbed down, but not to bad for a ff. I think its one of the better Naruto ff, atleast its kinda unique, and im just riding the wave and seeing where it takes me. give it a read if you like Naruto and want to see som uchiha clan building.
Keep up the good work Author-san, one of the best fan-fics out there on Naruto! Tbh breath of fresh air to read on more political side of story on Uchiha massacre, as oppsosed to other fics where its solved through brute force of protagonist. Lets see how MC will preserve the clan and survive in this one, so far promising.
i am rereading this novel. i have got to say, the conversation parts are really well done... not to mention, the rest of the novel - the politics, the fights, the emotions and the logic (both for fights and powers and for the thought process) the author has clearly done an extensive research on this novel. You would rarely find a fanfic of this level. The proportions of each part are maintained well. of course nothing more to say on the translation that is being done on this. Simply enjoyable apt and easy to understand. i really can't find anything to criticise here... This is a very high level fanfic. Probably on par with the likes of Lord of Mysteries and the Oracle path.
The description is a little disappointing, I don't like when the system replaces the development of the hero. That is, from my point of view, it would be right to beat this concept like this - the guy lived with a new family and gradually fell in love with it and decided for himself that he wanted to protect this family happiness at any cost and then a system appears. And here the description says head-on - there was some guy who lived to see the massacre, wanted to leave, but the system did not give him, because it turned out that then he would also die even if he survived, and if he saved the clan, he would become an imboy, just like that, right in the forehead. The difference is that this is not an independent decision of the character, it is the will of the author, which, instead of letting the character live, make mistakes and develop based on his own personality, turns the boy into a weak-willed puppet, where while she goes on quests, she will live and become stronger, but step to the left and the system will punish you for trying disobey.
174ch. and i dont want to read anymore. Whole ff is kingdom building. But the more i read the more bland it becomes. MC is quite manipulative, but that get in a way of charcter development and gaining friends. He have Colleagues but not friends. He seems to interract only with upper echelons of vilage and neglect everyone else, well i dont mean he dont care, he building quiete good goverment system in village where everyone can interrcat but he himself dont do it somehow.
this is obviously the superior version of the translation people keep saying he stole it from the author but that would apply to every translator including the first one which was much poorer quality this person has just as much of a right to translate as they did, also neither of them are the author of this novel their just separate translators and people are on here telling others not to donate if you want higher quality translation like this version then do donate.
