tempestpanda
dropped chapter 16 multiple issues with story 1 needing to enter a trial to progress -that isn't cultivation it's idiotic, for a trial in typical cultivation it is only when you are advancing to certain levels not every other fucking day. also rediculous that to enter a trial you need a crystal how the **** does a trial know if you earned the crystal or bought it 2 pricing the price for items that are classed as low is way to high for readers to associate with being low value 3 seems any twat entering store can buy things so far only 2 groups have entered but still spent a few hundred to a thousand gold making gold seem like cabbages 4 the way MC gets items is idotic, a shop needs consistency it be better if MC had a reward that allowed him to buy any product within certain parameters from a catalogue for filling shelves and not a random roulette wheel. could have had the roulette wheel as a secondary option with positibilty of getting a high value object for next to nothing 5. no forms of entertainment, MC is working in a small store he is the boss what's he do all day when no one enters stare at the walls. at least have a few books to read or a way for MC to learn to make things himself to fills his time
Overall an iffy novel, I stopped at ch 43. There are quite a bit of redundancy and poor writing that really gets in the way of reading. Currency and level system seems poorly planned. Also every crafter in the world seems incompetent as even the worst grade items are better than grandmasters. I guess the main fun about this novel is how the system trash talk the mc.
A great novel that does a good job of not setting characters to the side to be forgotten often, despite the larger amount of named characters, also has a pretty good world background to give better understanding. The only con is that chapters are a little short (but there’sover 500) and that it’s currently on an indefinite hiatus